a little flash i've been working on as practice for computer drawing. I'm still working on it, it's just that i'm not sure where to go, what sounds to add and WHERE to get a Kirby scream XD
I would say that you did a very nice small animation here. For Vision, however, I find it very very dark. Originality, Kirby has indeed been used in these types of animations before, where he is trapped and needs help I find for a very basic animation, Technique is quite high here. This animation manages to make a heavy inpact in "Is Kirby gonna die, is Meta knight going to help him, etc".
Over all, a very nicely done animation. I think once you get more expirence and make longer ones, then this little thing here ain't gonna mean as much. But its a great animation none the less.
For Vision, however, I find it very very dark.
Originality, Kirby has indeed been used in these types of animations before, where he is trapped and needs help
I find for a very basic animation, Technique is quite high here.
This animation manages to make a heavy inpact in "Is Kirby gonna die, is Meta knight going to help him, etc".
Over all, a very nicely done animation. I think once you get more expirence and make longer ones, then this little thing here ain't gonna mean as much. But its a great animation none the less.
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